I am very happy to have both a tanka and a tanka prose published in the latest edition of cattails journal. The tanka is actually the very first tanka I wrote, and it was for the first assignment on the Tanka Online course with Call of the Page.
a life too small
for your spirit
my heart aches
to bring you home
so many never-endings
(on p.106 of cattails 232)
It came to me as I was watching my hamster, Rogue, free roaming. When I set out to adopt a hamster, 30 years after my last one, I didn’t realise how much hamster care had changed. Unfortunately too small cages are still sold in pet shops, as hamsters continue to be seen as cheap pets suitable for children. This is even though the minimum ethical standard is now typically recommended as 100x50x50cm. When I watch Rogue in free roam and in her 122x50cm glass tank, I feel such sadness for my childhood hamsters and for all those hamsters I see in unsuitable cages online. Much as I would love to rescue all the hamsters in need, I have to accept that it’s not possible. The tanka also makes me think about other species, including humans, who are subjected to physical or emotional restriction that stops them from living a happy life.
The State of the Day
wildfires
rising interest rates
wasted years
desperate for donations
my heavy phone
Each day online feels like we are heading towards the Rapture. I want to look but not look, know but not know.
(on p.190 of cattails 232)
This tanka prose was one that came out of that feeling of every time I look at my phone, be it for news, social media or emails, there are awful things happening around the world. This seems even more appropriate at the moment given the situation with Israel-Gaza. For me there’s a tension between wanting to know about these things and not wanting to know. And at what point does looking at all these awful things become a kind of voyeuristic adrenaline kick. ‘The Rapture’ was the editor’s choice, which I agreed to. I had written ‘The End’. I realised afterwards I’m not entirely comfortable with the change as it’s a phrase I wouldn’t use, though it does feel more impactful. It’s been interesting to observe how I feel about this piece as a result. I’m still mentally adjusting to receiving suggested changes from editors. At what point does a change feel like it takes the piece beyond my own work? I’m guessing that this is something most writers grapple with, and not just in poetry.
I have more work due to be published elsewhere and I’m just about to do another submission. My writing has slowed down a lot due to a work project that took up a huge chunk of creative brainpower. I’m hoping that now that is largely complete, there’ll be space in my brain for more tanka writing.